What i have done well? What i need to improve?




What i have done well? 
I believe i have addressed my idea well enough for my audience to understand a brief idea of my concept, i have done this by telling them what i will be doing for my final idea, which is a music video, i have expressed my ideas for example what song i will be doing, and what location i will set this at ext.


What I need to improve on?
I believe that I didn't express my idea with confidence, and I also believe I wasn't in a presentable manner. I need to improve with my confidence and speaking within class work. To improve my slide show I could have added more ideas, for example more locations and different types of clothing my actors would wear ext.

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